The great pumpkin adventure and the secrets of the moonlight patch

Year 5

The great pumpkin adventure and the secrets of the moonlight patch is a free, NAPLAN-aligned writing resource for Year 5 students. It includes a story starter, complication, tiered vocabulary and scaffolds mapped to the Australian Curriculum (AC9).

Year 5 AC9E5LE05 AC9E5LA05 AC9E5LA08 AC9E5LA09 AC9E5LA04 AC9E5LY06

Supports the Year 5 achievement standard (creating written texts).

Australian Curriculum content descriptions © ACARA. Writesy is not affiliated with or endorsed by ACARA.

Under the shimmering light of a full moon, the pumpkin patch came alive with a soft, golden glow. Mia stood at the edge, her eyes wide with wonder as she gazed at the enormous jack-o'-lantern grinning back at her. It seemed to wink, as if inviting her to step closer and discover its secrets. With a heart full of curiosity and just a hint of bravery, Mia took a deep breath and ventured down the winding path that led into the shadowy school oval, ready for whatever magical adventure awaited her.

The complication

  • Mia follows the grinning jack-o'-lantern and becomes lost in a maze of taller pumpkins that rearrange themselves each time she turns.
  • A shadowy figure appears near the oval and claims the pumpkin’s light belongs to them, forcing Mia to decide whether to hide, bargain or stand her ground.
  • The golden glow begins to fade unless Mia solves a riddle carved into the jack-o'-lantern’s grin, but the riddle is written in a language only she can partially remember.

Sentence starters

  1. As Mia stepped closer, the jack-o'-lantern’s grin seemed to widen and the air smelled of autumn leaves.
  2. Mia crouched down and reached out to touch the carved tooth, her fingers tingling with cold excitement.

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What's in the full resource

  • Complications
  • Brainstorming Prompts
  • Vocabulary Support
  • Sentence Starters
  • Dialogue Prompts
  • Writing Challenges
  • Sentence Variety
  • Creative Twists
  • Writing Checklist
  • Reflective Questions
  • Collaborative Writing Ideas
  • Printable teacher and student PDFs

NAPLAN writing criteria this resource targets

Audience Text structure Ideas Character and setting Vocabulary Cohesion Paragraphing Sentence structure Punctuation Spelling

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